Creative Writing - Best piece

Short story : THE FOX & THE RABBIT

Characters :

The greedy fox

The poor rabbit

Moral:

Don’t be greedy . 

Help others in need . 

Don't be selfish.

Don't bully .

Share food.

Once upon a time in the jungle there was one greedy  fox and poor rabbit . The poor Rabbit and all Animals was so hungry and have no food with them because the greedy fox steal all the food for them and bullied them a lot . All the animals were scared of him . So one day a hunter came into the jungle and he wanted to capture  animals . So the hunter said “ all the animals will be captured and will be for his collection at home “ and he started to make the net trap for the animals . 

Meanwhile in the jungle the fox was stealing food from the animals and he also stole food from the poor rabbit . When it got dark the hunter  finished the trap of the animals. 

The hunter  went home to  give rest and he will check on the net tomorrow . Furthermore when the hunter went home the fox have all of the food in his mouth that he had stolen .

When the fox was going home he had stepped on the hunter's net and he got caught .  The fox bite and scratch and he couldn't free himself out of the net and he cried to the animals any ask for help and nobody answered. After a minute all of the animals came outside and looked at the fox trapped inside of the hunter’s trap . All animals was happy that the fox were captured except the poor rabbit . The poor rabbit was so kind that he thought it was not good to leave him there . All animals was shouting hip hip hooray in joy . All animals said “ the greedy fox is down now we can live in peace and we cannot be hungry anymore “. After a while the fox realised his mistake and it was too late to say sorry . After a while the rabbit came and said to everybody “it is not right to do it , if we do it will be same as him and also the fox has realised his mistake.'' “Now we can free the fox and give him one more chance .” The rabbit  told the fox to make a promise that he won't steal any food again . All the animals agreed with the rabbit helped him cut the net and free the fox . When the fox got free he was so embarrassed of himself and he said sorry and thank you all the animal and a big thank you to the rabbit for saving his life . All of the animals were happy and living in peace and sharing food which each and another . The poor rabbit wasn't poor anymore and the greedy fox wasn’t greedy anymore . The rabbit and the fox was best friend and lived happily ever after . Meanwhile in the morning the hunter came and looked at his net  and he saw nothing so he gave up catching animals . The end …

3 Reflection :
1. What am i learning ? I am learning how to make short stories .
2.How does this work show my learning? I learnt that fable need a moral and including it to my
writing .
3.What am i wondering ? When I finished writing this fable I felt a  sad in the starting but after rereading the whole story I felt happy .