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Q  = Quote - from the text.
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R  = Rhetorical Question  - a question you don't have to answer.
T = Title - ' The Merchant Of Venice '
A = Author - William Shakespeare
K = Key Argument - use words from the question . What are you arguing . A key moment that shocked the reader was when antonio agreed to pay a pound of his flesh to shylock if he didn't repay his bond .
O = Outline  - the 3 things you are going to write about - red , white and blue . He was willing to die for money to give Bassanio . Shylock and Antonio hate each other .  Shylock doesn't show mercy .


"If you wrong us , shall we not revenge ? " ( Shakespeare- Shylock ) Have you ever felt like taking revenge ? In William Shakespeare's 'The Merchant Of Venice ' a key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio Agreed to forfeit a pound   of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond . this moment was shocking , outrageous and fascinating . This moment was important to the text as a whole because Shylock and Antonio didn't like each other but will agreed on the bond , Antonio  was willing to risk his life for Bassanio and Shylock did not show mercy in charming his bond .   

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P= Point - The moment when Antonio agreed to the bond was shocking because Shylock and Antonio didn't get along .
E=Evidence - Antonio was a Merchant , Shylock made a living lending people money with interest .
While Shylock charged interest , Antonio lent money without interest and scorned Shylock for doing so .He also spat at Shylock and called him " cut throat dog ".
E= Explain - Therefore , the reader is shocked to discover Antonio and Shylock can come agreement about money lending . It is also Shocking because when Shylock calls Antonio out for the way he treat him, antonio  tells Shylock that he wil spit on him and call him  a dog again . This treatment is not usual between people who make agreements .
L=Link - With treatment like this from Antonio towards Shylock , and a promise to be just as cruel in the future , it is shocking that they both agreed to the bond.


Mirror conclusion 
In William Shakespeare 'the Merchant Of Venice ' A key moment that shocked the reader was when Antonio Agreed to forfeit a pound   of flesh to Shylock if he didn't repay his bond . This was shocking because Antanio hated Shylock and promised to mistreat him in the future. Antonio  was willing to risk his life for Bassanio and Shylock did not show mercy in charming his bond .  Finally, because Shylock had never shown mercy and did not at the trial for theses reasons it is clear that this moment was shocking to the reader.